Absolutely โ we like your story and you do not need the opinions of persnickity 'hollier than thou' assholes. They can write their own stories however they please, if they can write at all. A shame that the mods allow their depracating diatribe to exist
>If you are not happy with it โ Then piss off elsewhere โ You are probably one of those leaches who always wants a free ride and did not pay off your student loans
LOL Wrong on all accounts, Keyboard Commando. I've never leeched off society, unlike your dumb ass. I've worked hard for everything I have and the very well-paying job I have. I also have a degree that I paid for out-of-pocket with no student loans. I make over $100k per year between everything I've got going and am looking at bumping my pay up to around $200k, all based off hard work and my qualifications. From the way you're carrying on like an offended little bitch, it's safe to say that you're one of those leeches you're whining about, buttercup. Have a nice day languishing in obscurity. ๐๐๐
One it's a great story and I can't wait to hear more. Two don't worry about the punctuation and grammar, it's readable, we can understand it and it's a fucking great story
i don't think their will be anymore it's the only sex we do my adoptive parents still don't know but im just addicted to her pussy i actually hate her but pussy just too good
Great story...didnt even noticed punctuation๐๐
Wow! What a story, is this really true?๐๐พโโ๏ธ
Unfortunately I have to deal with her addictive pussy
Sorry, but I just canโt read this. All bold, no capitalization or punctuation, sentences that never end. TLDR: learn to write.
Then piss off elsewhere
Absolutely โ we like your story and you do not need the opinions of persnickity 'hollier than thou' assholes. They can write their own stories however they please, if they can write at all. A shame that the mods allow their depracating diatribe to exist
One word...no...TWO words... FUCKING PUNCTUATION!
>If you are not happy with it โ Then piss off elsewhere โ You are probably one of those leaches who always wants a free ride and did not pay off your student loans
LOL Wrong on all accounts, Keyboard Commando. I've never leeched off society, unlike your dumb ass. I've worked hard for everything I have and the very well-paying job I have. I also have a degree that I paid for out-of-pocket with no student loans. I make over $100k per year between everything I've got going and am looking at bumping my pay up to around $200k, all based off hard work and my qualifications. From the way you're carrying on like an offended little bitch, it's safe to say that you're one of those leeches you're whining about, buttercup. Have a nice day languishing in obscurity. ๐๐๐
2 words donโt care
Fabulous read fuck the punctuation this read got me off before the punch line of it being your birth mom. This was awesome
Impossible to read, come back when you learn about commas, punctuation, capitalization, and everything that makes reading not a painful experience.
Why does everyone think they are an English teacher great story man true or not still a great story
I donโt worry about the grammar when I read other peoples stories Iโm to busy jerking off Virgins are people who worry about grammar
One it's a great story and I can't wait to hear more. Two don't worry about the punctuation and grammar, it's readable, we can understand it and it's a fucking great story
i don't think their will be anymore it's the only sex we do my adoptive parents still don't know but im just addicted to her pussy i actually hate her but pussy just too good
good pussy is pussy ro keep. and so lucky she wants to share it with you. don't let it get away
Good story. Cant wait to read more
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You should write more about that!
Great story. Keep writing but it would be cool if you could use punctuation.